This story is written so well and honest, I felt hurt by the comment: "You suck, dad". My husband and I have the same reactions from our grown, ( but not mature. Like at all. ), brothers and sisters. Just remember, you are a badass writer, a great and dedicated family man, and that Mr. Harding can never be as cool as you. If all else fails, keep in mind, most British people have bad teeth. If that helps at all.
Ha, I love how you turned the negative stereotype of"soccer mom" on its head with "Soccer dad." Here's a guy who doesn't see his role as 'soccer dad' as a negative but instead relishes the role and responsibility. Then you take us in deeper to soccer dad's parental jealousies and insecurities. There might be other writers out there willing to explore the region of male, parental frustrations and insecurities but I'm not aware of them. It's a perspective that could use more attention to be sure. Of course, I'm older and historically the father figure is a cardboard cutout with all the generic positive qualities ascribed to him. This is a bucket of cold water splashed in the face of those old tropes. And it's a fun ride with enough pathos and insight to keep us curious. Nicely done Matt. Thank you.
So right, reflexes, fathers and sons-you had me rolling around these true themes for days. Thanks
Thanks for the memories Matt of being a soccer mom with three boys going through the programs. Really loved how this story evolved.
This story is written so well and honest, I felt hurt by the comment: "You suck, dad". My husband and I have the same reactions from our grown, ( but not mature. Like at all. ), brothers and sisters. Just remember, you are a badass writer, a great and dedicated family man, and that Mr. Harding can never be as cool as you. If all else fails, keep in mind, most British people have bad teeth. If that helps at all.
Ha, I love how you turned the negative stereotype of"soccer mom" on its head with "Soccer dad." Here's a guy who doesn't see his role as 'soccer dad' as a negative but instead relishes the role and responsibility. Then you take us in deeper to soccer dad's parental jealousies and insecurities. There might be other writers out there willing to explore the region of male, parental frustrations and insecurities but I'm not aware of them. It's a perspective that could use more attention to be sure. Of course, I'm older and historically the father figure is a cardboard cutout with all the generic positive qualities ascribed to him. This is a bucket of cold water splashed in the face of those old tropes. And it's a fun ride with enough pathos and insight to keep us curious. Nicely done Matt. Thank you.
A very fine piece of writing, Matt, as always.
Very entertaining. I wondered how it would turn out.